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finished image..
Dat Basitin in the background, waaaay over there... can you see him?
<img src="http://stat.rumandmonkey.com/tests/1/6/5261/20801.jpg" />
[url=http://dragcave.net/view/4ljLc][img]http://dragcave.net/image/4ljLc.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/BjVn3][img]http://dragcave.net/image/BjVn3.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/FQBUS][img]http://dragcave.net/image/FQBUS.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/tuu4u][img]http://dragcave.net/image/tuu4u.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/NxB7w][img]http://dragcave.net/image/NxB7w.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/vEKF2][img]http://dragcave.net/image/vEKF2.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/An2om][img]http://dragcave.net/image/An2om.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/0fQlE][img]http://dragcave.net/image/0fQlE.gif[/img][/url]
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So here is the start of my next page. I skipped the whole conversation about the master spy because it had nothing to do with the RP members. Anyway, there will probably only be one or two more pages of prolouge after this one. after that its on to the paneled comic. YEAY! if you wernt in the prologue and you still want a chat avatar of yourself let me know which of your characters you would like me to draw one of.
Dat Basitin in the background, waaaay over there... can you see him?
<img src="http://stat.rumandmonkey.com/tests/1/6/5261/20801.jpg" />
[url=http://dragcave.net/view/4ljLc][img]http://dragcave.net/image/4ljLc.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/BjVn3][img]http://dragcave.net/image/BjVn3.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/FQBUS][img]http://dragcave.net/image/FQBUS.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/tuu4u][img]http://dragcave.net/image/tuu4u.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/NxB7w][img]http://dragcave.net/image/NxB7w.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/vEKF2][img]http://dragcave.net/image/vEKF2.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/An2om][img]http://dragcave.net/image/An2om.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/0fQlE][img]http://dragcave.net/image/0fQlE.gif[/img][/url]
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Ok, here is the finished new page. Let me know if you guy's find any errors.
Dat Basitin in the background, waaaay over there... can you see him?
<img src="http://stat.rumandmonkey.com/tests/1/6/5261/20801.jpg" />
[url=http://dragcave.net/view/4ljLc][img]http://dragcave.net/image/4ljLc.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/BjVn3][img]http://dragcave.net/image/BjVn3.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/FQBUS][img]http://dragcave.net/image/FQBUS.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/tuu4u][img]http://dragcave.net/image/tuu4u.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/NxB7w][img]http://dragcave.net/image/NxB7w.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/vEKF2][img]http://dragcave.net/image/vEKF2.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/An2om][img]http://dragcave.net/image/An2om.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/0fQlE][img]http://dragcave.net/image/0fQlE.gif[/img][/url]
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work on the sketch for the next cover page...
Dat Basitin in the background, waaaay over there... can you see him?
<img src="http://stat.rumandmonkey.com/tests/1/6/5261/20801.jpg" />
[url=http://dragcave.net/view/4ljLc][img]http://dragcave.net/image/4ljLc.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/BjVn3][img]http://dragcave.net/image/BjVn3.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/FQBUS][img]http://dragcave.net/image/FQBUS.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/tuu4u][img]http://dragcave.net/image/tuu4u.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/NxB7w][img]http://dragcave.net/image/NxB7w.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/vEKF2][img]http://dragcave.net/image/vEKF2.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/An2om][img]http://dragcave.net/image/An2om.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/0fQlE][img]http://dragcave.net/image/0fQlE.gif[/img][/url]
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improved sketch...
Dat Basitin in the background, waaaay over there... can you see him?
<img src="http://stat.rumandmonkey.com/tests/1/6/5261/20801.jpg" />
[url=http://dragcave.net/view/4ljLc][img]http://dragcave.net/image/4ljLc.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/BjVn3][img]http://dragcave.net/image/BjVn3.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/FQBUS][img]http://dragcave.net/image/FQBUS.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/tuu4u][img]http://dragcave.net/image/tuu4u.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/NxB7w][img]http://dragcave.net/image/NxB7w.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/vEKF2][img]http://dragcave.net/image/vEKF2.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/An2om][img]http://dragcave.net/image/An2om.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/0fQlE][img]http://dragcave.net/image/0fQlE.gif[/img][/url]
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More progress... Still thinking of what the background should be. I know he isnt wearing a helmet but this is a character page so I want people to see his face.
Dat Basitin in the background, waaaay over there... can you see him?
<img src="http://stat.rumandmonkey.com/tests/1/6/5261/20801.jpg" />
[url=http://dragcave.net/view/4ljLc][img]http://dragcave.net/image/4ljLc.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/BjVn3][img]http://dragcave.net/image/BjVn3.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/FQBUS][img]http://dragcave.net/image/FQBUS.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/tuu4u][img]http://dragcave.net/image/tuu4u.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/NxB7w][img]http://dragcave.net/image/NxB7w.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/vEKF2][img]http://dragcave.net/image/vEKF2.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/An2om][img]http://dragcave.net/image/An2om.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/0fQlE][img]http://dragcave.net/image/0fQlE.gif[/img][/url]
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More work done. I dont know what the symbol I put on his shoulder is from but I know it's from somewhere. Could you guys let me know if you recognize it? I'll delete it and change it to something more original later. just didnt like the blank space.
Dat Basitin in the background, waaaay over there... can you see him?
<img src="http://stat.rumandmonkey.com/tests/1/6/5261/20801.jpg" />
[url=http://dragcave.net/view/4ljLc][img]http://dragcave.net/image/4ljLc.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/BjVn3][img]http://dragcave.net/image/BjVn3.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/FQBUS][img]http://dragcave.net/image/FQBUS.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/tuu4u][img]http://dragcave.net/image/tuu4u.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/NxB7w][img]http://dragcave.net/image/NxB7w.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/vEKF2][img]http://dragcave.net/image/vEKF2.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/An2om][img]http://dragcave.net/image/An2om.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/0fQlE][img]http://dragcave.net/image/0fQlE.gif[/img][/url]
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Ok, more work on the cover page. I think I improved the face shape, I still have yet to draw the face. More of the armor drawn, sword hilt drawn in and I sketched in a cape. I am having issues with how his tail and cape should look together though. should I have his tail poking out from under his cape?
Dat Basitin in the background, waaaay over there... can you see him?
<img src="http://stat.rumandmonkey.com/tests/1/6/5261/20801.jpg" />
[url=http://dragcave.net/view/4ljLc][img]http://dragcave.net/image/4ljLc.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/BjVn3][img]http://dragcave.net/image/BjVn3.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/FQBUS][img]http://dragcave.net/image/FQBUS.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/tuu4u][img]http://dragcave.net/image/tuu4u.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/NxB7w][img]http://dragcave.net/image/NxB7w.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/vEKF2][img]http://dragcave.net/image/vEKF2.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/An2om][img]http://dragcave.net/image/An2om.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/0fQlE][img]http://dragcave.net/image/0fQlE.gif[/img][/url]
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OK, been a while since i have had time to work on this... anyway here is the last page of the prologue. let me know if you see any errors.
Dat Basitin in the background, waaaay over there... can you see him?
<img src="http://stat.rumandmonkey.com/tests/1/6/5261/20801.jpg" />
[url=http://dragcave.net/view/4ljLc][img]http://dragcave.net/image/4ljLc.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/BjVn3][img]http://dragcave.net/image/BjVn3.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/FQBUS][img]http://dragcave.net/image/FQBUS.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/tuu4u][img]http://dragcave.net/image/tuu4u.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/NxB7w][img]http://dragcave.net/image/NxB7w.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/vEKF2][img]http://dragcave.net/image/vEKF2.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/An2om][img]http://dragcave.net/image/An2om.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/0fQlE][img]http://dragcave.net/image/0fQlE.gif[/img][/url]
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Ok guys. I am back to actively drawing. sorry for talking so long. Cover page not finished yet, but I do have a lot more of it done. I dont like DB's shirt color. Suggestions?
Dat Basitin in the background, waaaay over there... can you see him?
<img src="http://stat.rumandmonkey.com/tests/1/6/5261/20801.jpg" />
[url=http://dragcave.net/view/4ljLc][img]http://dragcave.net/image/4ljLc.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/BjVn3][img]http://dragcave.net/image/BjVn3.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/FQBUS][img]http://dragcave.net/image/FQBUS.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/tuu4u][img]http://dragcave.net/image/tuu4u.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/NxB7w][img]http://dragcave.net/image/NxB7w.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/vEKF2][img]http://dragcave.net/image/vEKF2.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/An2om][img]http://dragcave.net/image/An2om.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/0fQlE][img]http://dragcave.net/image/0fQlE.gif[/img][/url]
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Red Or blue?
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well I dont know about you guys...but I think db's picture looks good...meaning the db in the picture itself...his frown looks a bit odd, and a bit straight IMO, but other then that, it looks good...but personally, I think the cape looks a bit monotone to be realistic...ish...maybe add some highlights or shades to make it look like its an actual cape irl...donno how realistic your going for, but most capes in scenes are not all one color, or as much of one color as that one is... just my two cents... maybe make db's smile, or lack there of, a bit less straight of a line... *shrugs*
other than that, I think it looks good db...
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personally, i like the way DB (character) looks, and the 'frown' i think adds character XD
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um flora... you do know im not done with the shading yet right?
Dat Basitin in the background, waaaay over there... can you see him?
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yea...i know...but you asked for input, and I actually gave realistic input this time ;p
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Finally had some more time to work on the comic...
Dat Basitin in the background, waaaay over there... can you see him?
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[url=http://dragcave.net/view/4ljLc][img]http://dragcave.net/image/4ljLc.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/BjVn3][img]http://dragcave.net/image/BjVn3.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/FQBUS][img]http://dragcave.net/image/FQBUS.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/tuu4u][img]http://dragcave.net/image/tuu4u.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/NxB7w][img]http://dragcave.net/image/NxB7w.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/vEKF2][img]http://dragcave.net/image/vEKF2.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/An2om][img]http://dragcave.net/image/An2om.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/0fQlE][img]http://dragcave.net/image/0fQlE.gif[/img][/url]
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liking the reflection affect.
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I agree with dotz...the reflection makes it a LOT more badass
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Totally epic.
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Finished and working on the next page. I'm still deciding on the layout.... Do you guys think the text is readable enough?
Dat Basitin in the background, waaaay over there... can you see him?
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[url=http://dragcave.net/view/4ljLc][img]http://dragcave.net/image/4ljLc.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/BjVn3][img]http://dragcave.net/image/BjVn3.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/FQBUS][img]http://dragcave.net/image/FQBUS.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/tuu4u][img]http://dragcave.net/image/tuu4u.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/NxB7w][img]http://dragcave.net/image/NxB7w.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/vEKF2][img]http://dragcave.net/image/vEKF2.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/An2om][img]http://dragcave.net/image/An2om.gif[/img][/url] [url=http://dragcave.net/view/0fQlE][img]http://dragcave.net/image/0fQlE.gif[/img][/url]
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